Paige a thoroughly organised blog and in tasks order. Very good. keep this level of organisation and regular blogging to this high level. Excellent start.
+ You've demonstrated a good collection of skills that you've learnt in this magazine + The fonts and overall style of the magazine are consistent + The different sections of the pages are clearly identified
- The quality control of the magazine is too lacklustre i.e. the magazine has an overall shabby look with words being cut off and margins not being consistent - The front cover doesn't have a clear cover line - Some of text could have been moved to areas they can be read better
Overall, needs layout improvement but a good start.
the front cover is very neat and the image is clear and precise can clearly read the writing. i think you could include more colours but overall it fits the target audience of college student. i like the choice of images the fit in well you can clearly read the writing and the page numbers.However i think it needs to be a bit more organised the writing could be on one side and the images on the other but overall i think its really good.
Paige a thoroughly organised blog and in tasks order. Very good. keep this level of organisation and regular blogging to this high level. Excellent start.
ReplyDelete+ You've demonstrated a good collection of skills that you've learnt in this magazine
ReplyDelete+ The fonts and overall style of the magazine are consistent
+ The different sections of the pages are clearly identified
- The quality control of the magazine is too lacklustre i.e. the magazine has an overall shabby look with words being cut off and margins not being consistent
- The front cover doesn't have a clear cover line
- Some of text could have been moved to areas they can be read better
Overall, needs layout improvement but a good start.
the front cover is very neat and the image is clear and precise can clearly read the writing. i think you could include more colours but overall it fits the target audience of college student. i like the choice of images the fit in well you can clearly read the writing and the page numbers.However i think it needs to be a bit more organised the writing could be on one side and the images on the other but overall i think its really good.
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